The idea for this poster was a good one but the writing on the backs of the shirts, which was meant to be a main focus, was only noticed last or not even at all. The layout of the poster was too simple and needed a more interesting form.
Although this poster has a solid idea behind it, it is hard to get the idea of football and bbq from it, I feel we we're focusing too much on the disaster side of things and not on the bbq and sport side.
This is a different iteration of the same poster, but the same thing still applies it is not really doing what it should be doing, We need to focus more on the sporting side of things to get the team work message across.



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