After looking at the first page, we decided we need to change the image on it because the text/image combination just looks very still and none in action like the poster does. So we are going to change that to something a little more exciting that related back to the original image of the poster,
Looking at the middle spread the structural hierarchy is good however everything else feels a little clustered together I think we need to resolve this by putting into columns and following the grid system a little more strictly.
We feel the last page is good and speaks to our event nicely and brings back a sense of familiarity to the flyer.



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